Feeling
what contradicts
what is
felt for you
Sacraficing
of self
to those
who are selfish
Bringing happiness
while
only receiving
sorrow
Giving your all
for that
which leaves you
with nothing
Loving
a love
that doesn't
love you back
SYM (1995)
Friday, November 30, 2007
REJECTION...
Scripted by KIKI at 8:57 PM
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4 critiqued:
Kiki, I didnt know you was over flowing girl!! I like
Aw hell, been here before! And you captured the feeling perfectly, feels like ish!
Yep, I wanna slap Unloved on to the title of this poem. Its a sickening feeling, undeserving to those who give.. I wish these words to reflect upon no one because experiencing this is pain undesribable.. I'm going through that now, again..
But that is a simple, Beautiful poem. -Q.
Welcome Q...and thank you!
...and it does get better...
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