CLICK HERE FOR THOUSANDS OF FREE BLOGGER TEMPLATES »

Tuesday, November 27, 2007

UNLOVED

Dreaming of it
yearning for it
Prayers whispered
a longing for

Offerring of self
needing to feel
Unconditional giving of
boldly stated emotion

Dream deferred
yearning extinguished
Prayer unanswered
longing shortend

Offer rejected
now unfeeling
Gift re-gifted
words unheard

Feeling unloved


SYM

7 critiqued:

Shai said...

Whew! I am feelin this one. Gurl, you are talented.

KIKI said...

Thanks Shai!

(and you not gonna make me blush...i refuse...)

Rich Fitzgerald said...

I have to agree with Shai. You cuss well, but you express yourself pretty darn good creatively as well.

KIKI said...

Thank you Rich...I try...

Mizrepresent said...

"gift re-gifted",and it will always be, until the right one comes along...go'on Kiki get your sway on girl!

-Q. said...

So i was right, what i was feeling.. thankyou -Q.

KIKI said...

Yes you were...